DON'T: (although it isn't bad, its cluttered and had information that wont be seen in the image, which may cause me to get lost in reading it multiple times, keep in mind, the example is still considered small from the novels of multiple pages I have had to read trough in the past, so long in some cases that it has prompted me to make this)
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Hello! I would love to commission you! this is great and this is my first commission and I am a novelist, I am planning on getting a full illustration of my OC with a BG !
so here is Anna my rabbit hybrid fox OC! she was born in some fantasy world i created and there is magic going around, she uses nature magic of the Aurolean mishaps and learned it very young! she learned it with her friend "bro!" he is another one of my oc's! bro and anna went out on an adventure and she tripped over a branch once but he caught her with nature magic and so she learned to do it too!
But bro had a secret crush on her all along! and and... he really likes her boobens
so I want this to be like! a picture! of a solo magic mishap
where she uses her nature magic and gets a wardrobe malfucntion! that has her boobens pop out! and she was really not expecting it and is thinking "omg how could i have made this mistake !!! i am such a fool and stuff"
she is 21 right now but has very round eyes and she will look flustered! please remove like 90% of the outfit, it just EXPLODED OFF of er with vine leaf tentacles everywhere!
HOW TO FIX: (grey being excess that wont be shown in the requested image regardless)
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Hello! I would love to commission you! this is great and this is my first commission and I am a novelist, I am planning on getting a full illustration of my OC with a BG !
so here is Anna my rabbit hybrid fox OC! she was born in some fantasy world i created and there is magic going around, she uses nature magic of the Aurolean mishaps and learned it very young! she learned it with her friend "bro!" he is another one of my oc's! bro and anna went out on an adventure and she tripped over a branch once but he caught her with nature magic and so she learned to do it too!
But bro had a secret crush on her all along! and and... he really likes her boobens
so I want this to be like! a picture! of a solo magic mishap
where she uses her nature magic and gets a wardrobe malfucntion! that has her boobens pop out! and she was really not expecting it and is thinking "omg how could i have made this mistake !!! i am such a fool and stuff"
she is 21 right now but has very round eyes and she will look flustered! please remove like 90% of the outfit, it just EXPLODED OFF of er with vine leaf tentacles everywhere!
ADJUSTED: (removed the excess)
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Hello! I would love to commission you! this is great and this is my first commission and I am a novelist, I am planning on getting a full illustration of my OC with a BG !
so here is Anna my rabbit hybrid fox OC!
she uses nature magic
so I want this to be like! a picture! of a solo magic mishap
where she uses her nature magic and gets a wardrobe malfunction! that has her boobens pop out!
has very round eyes and she will look flustered! please remove like 90% of the outfit, it just EXPLODED OFF of er with vine leaf tentacles everywhere!
HOW I WILL READ THE ADJUSTED: (grey being my thoughts)
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full illustration of my OC with a BG
Rabbit hybrid fox OC! (ill probably have an image ref)
she uses nature magic (probably green magic with flowers and plants floating around)
magic wardrobe malfunction! focus on boobs!
round eyes, flustered! near naked shreds of cloth, rough vine leaf tentacles (+ cloth shreds flying around)